INTRA-FORUM CONTEST #7
CRITIQUES BY
Nancy G. Firefly
|
ARTIST & SONG |
RANKING
ON 10 |
COMMENTS |
| 01-Iggy It's OK |
2
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I enjoyed listening. The voice
and the keyboards really stand out in the tune. I like it because you
said this was a song for your wife! Hey, we are talking Valentines Day.
For the record, Valentines Days has really sucked for me the last 10 years.
Can you song make me feel good about love? Can your song make me feel
better deep inside my heart and soul? I am a listener, not a judge.
I dig the Beatles influence in this song. Your lyrics are balanced. It is almost too pretty for me but your mood and your sound pulls me into this tune. "Imagine" by Lennon, thats what the keyboards remind me of. This is a great song. Thank you for sharing the sounds of your heart through this song. |
| 02-Nancy G. Firefly I Have A Song |
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| 03-Brian Dragonfly |
4
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This is a ballad of lost love,
boy can I relate. This song is romantic. It is just right for Valentines
day. The vocals, guitar and etc. are perfectly balanced. Okay, first this
song was a little "Who" sounding, then I heard a little "Nickel
Creek" vocals maybe. If I were to say what I thought it sounded like
this song it would be the group "Bourguis Tagg" produced by Todd Rundgren. This song really touches the depth of my heart and soul. The harmonies are excellent. This melody seems to hold me. The lead is awesome too. I hear an acoustic guitar and I like it! Your lyrics could be a little stronger, but over all I love this song. Your song is the kind of song I would like to listen to over again. Thanks for sharing the sounds of your heart. Firefly |
| 04-Markus Because of Monica |
6
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This song has a very clean sound.
I love it. It reminds me of James Taylor. Your vocals are great. Maybe
you should add a little reverb to the vocals... Your words are dreamy
the way I like it. Your song reaches me. Although the words are predictable,
I really dig this song. It makes me feel comfort and takes my mind off
of my troubles. Thank you for sharing the sounds of your heart.
Firefly |
| 05-Todd Flowers in the Sun |
3
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I like the guitar lead in this
song. I love the beat of the drums. It reminds me of U2 and that is great.
I love your vocals as always you win my heart over in your songs. Your
harmonies are strong and passionate! Your bridge is extremely moody the
way I like it! The lyrics are perfect. I really don't know how I could
add to this song; it is complete, but maybe a little bit too long for
radio play, which is about 3:30 minutes a song. Thank you again for sharing the sounds of your heart. Firefly |
| 06-Bobbio I Should Be Coming Home to You |
1
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Bobbio, this song is totally awesome.
"I Should Be Coming Home"...perfect Valentine's Day song. It
is something different and that is what makes it appealing to me. This
has great recording value to it. Your chord progessions are beautiful
as well. This song totally touched my heart. It is "Heart Music"
for sure! It is sad and lonely, the way I see things today in my own music. You song touched the depths of my heart and soul.You are painting a picture of your affections and Valentine's Day. Great job! Great song! Thank you for sharing the sounds of your heart. Firefly |
| 07-Jens More than A Cliché |
8
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Jens, I totally love your song. I wish I could
speak and understand Danish, but I can't. I can feel your song deep inside.
I really dig your chords and love the lyrics. This would make a great
lounge song, you know...in a beautiful place just you and your piano playing
to an audience of class. Thank you for sharing the sounds of your heart! |
| 08-Kris S Who, When & Where |
9
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I can't get my computers to cooperate. I can not listen to your sounds.
So I will comment on your lyrics, after all I love poetry. You words
crave into my heart. I feel these words and relate. I love the message
you are conveying. Firefly |
| 09-Peter M Don't Care Who Knows |
7
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Unfortunately, I can't get my computers to play your song. I will have
to judge on the content of your lyrics. I love poetry and this one is
great. Lubrication..lol....I love it. You love someone that is in a
relationship with an other and that love brushes against your heart
every now and then. I can relate to this song. You want to speak out
the sounds of your heart and you do. I would so totally love to "hear"
the harp in this one. Firefly Firefly |
| 10-Kneena With All My Love |
5
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Kneena, You seem to be a beautiful
person as reflected in your music. I really enjoyed your song. Everything
is great with our song, vocals, lyrics and the sound. I loved the way
you reviewed each song with a phrase. So Thank you for sharing the sounds
of your heart. "Sounds of the heart make this moment unwind..true love never dies, it rests within this vine".... Thanks for sharing, Firefly |
| 11-Dave C The Words That I Rehearse For You |
10
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Dave C, I loved your song very
much. All these songs are buttering me up for Valentine's day...although
I don't like Valentines Day, if you read my poem about this day you would
understand. "It's Just Another Day to Me".. www.nancy-heartmusic.com if you want to read my thoughts on "Hearts Day".... I can feel your excitement in your song that you convey and it turns me on. This is a beautiful love song. It makes for a great Valentines Day song. Thank you for sharing the sounds of your heart. Firefly |