JLSC INTRA-FORUM CONTEST #4
SONG CRITIQUES BY
92-BOBBIO
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ARTIST & SONG |
RANK |
RATING |
COMMENTS |
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01-Lee Alexander |
4 |
7.5 |
Good clean sound....not much distinction between the verses and the chorus, but overall nicely done...very pleasant. |
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02-Melina |
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03-Joe Huettner |
5 |
7 |
Too many words jammed into the song...kept thinking to myself "Take a breath Joe!"...but I love the music..the overall feel...very clean rock...nice vocal work... |
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04-Mike Tricker |
1 |
9.5 |
This song is darn near flawless....there's a little bit of confusion in the bridge...but I'll blame that on the vocalist...I'd get this one to Sarah Brightman... |
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05-David Tallent |
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06-Alex Calvo |
10 |
4.5 |
This is more of a movie background piece than a song...as a song...the intro is way too long...there's just too many effects on everything...can't understand the words....that being said....You could pitch it to TV or Movies.... |
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07-Nancy G. Brundrett |
6 |
6.5 |
Got an echo effect listening to it...but this is really pretty good.....I might sing the title line with a bit more pizazz...maybe higher...but definitely redo this one...it's the best I've heard of your songs...with some production..a keeper. |
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08-Don Lyman |
8 |
5 |
Well....you just can't expect old guys like me to not hear "Ventura Highway" when they hear this....kept waiting for something other than that to happen...then you took a long lead.....sorry...couldn't make it any further....The way the electric guitars are first introduced into the song was pretty cool though... |
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09-Robert Field |
8 |
5 |
Lyrics a cliche...music just drones on in a circle...needs to break out, but never does...adding a diverse bridge could make a huge difference...but as it stands.....well? |
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10-Jeremy Haynes |
2 |
8.5 |
Cool idea using the "churchy" sound....with that title.Loved the melody at "is all she ever brings" and how the title is used with the same.....makes the song....Kinda reminds me of The Wondermints...(Brian Wilson's favorite band)...however....couldn't understand the words alot of the time...the lyrics confused me...I got the general idea, but needed a little more to fully understand. The organ break was as cool as it gets...a big surprise...but...wanted you to come back singing again instead of fading out....good work. |
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11-Joro |
3 |
8 |
This one is nowhere near my "alley"...but can't help but appreciate how well written it is....I certainly can relate to the story..not a thing about the song to really criticize...the recording could be helped by bringing those background vocals down a notch...and I guess I prefer you sing it with a more lazy approach...you seem to annunciate as if it's your second language...but...you certainly know what you're doing...very nice. |
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12-Hazelglow |
7 |
6 |
Simple jazz....bouncy but with no back beat....needs that to really make sense...lyrics nothing out of the ordinary..Maybe with drums it wouldn't feel so dull....just goes in a straight line......and for way too long...this is new...I'm sure you're still working it out... |