JLSC INTRA-FORUM CONTEST #4

SONG CRITIQUES BY

MIKE TRICKER 

Here are Mike's critiques that he sent by email:

I Couldn't do them all being as I am on my hols and this an internet cafe...

anyhow that's my fault for not thinking about that before I started... but enough already here are my marks

sorry to be brief weh everyone else has been so verbose. I hate markignother peoples stuff its just not my thing.
Do not judge lest ye be judged it says in the good book now i know why...

they are all cool

ARTIST & SONG

RANK
on 7

RATING

COMMENTS

01-Lee Alexander
Someday

1

8

Like it lots. lead in to chorus a bit contrived in places...

02-Melina
Oedipus Rex

6

6.5

I have jeard melinas stuff and she really is talented.
This is an off day.

03-Joe Huettner
One More Mile

4

7

Good old rock and role banal lyrics

04-Mike Tricker
Lifetime of Love

  

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05-David Tallent
Don't Run Away

3

7.5

Liked it could dance to it.

06-Alex Calvo
Anaconda

1

8

really original could do with better lyrics.

07-Nancy G. Brundrett
Lost and Found

  

 

 

08-Don Lyman
I Am Here

  

 

 

09-Robert Field
What She Said

  

 

 

10-Jeremy Haynes
Piety and Greed

  

 

 

11-Joro
Chasing Sunsets

5

6.75

Nice enough nive guitar. but didnt make me think ytes thats good

12-Hazelglow
Happy Just Being Here

7

6.25

avregare stuff just didnt move me.